Ok ive finished my first chapter, its not that good yet, but its still quite funny. A special thanks to STiCKs13  for giving me the idea to write this story xX
  ok here goes nothing :

                                                 Chapter 1

    
        "Naboo!" called vince from his room.  "Naboo!" he repeated running downstairs, His hair all frizzy and looking like a bush.  "Naboo have you taken my straigtners? because they're missing"

 "You know i never use straigtners, They're for women !" Naboo replied

 "They're not JUST for women!" Vince said in a moody voice

"They are" giggled Naboo and looked back at his paper he was reading and nibbled a hobnob which was crumbling all over the new carpets.

  Vince quickly changed the subject  "So do you know where they are??"

"No" Replied Naboo still nibbling on the hobnob, and drinking hot coa-coa.

"This is serious!, i cant go round looking like a living bush!" Said Vince still holding his hair down and trying to use jel to keep it in place (Didnt work)

  "Why dont you ask howard?? This will teach you to look after your things!"
 
        But Vince wasnt listening, he was too busy running around the office trying to find Howard and flattening his hair down.

Vince found Howard in his room his room listening to jazz. He was in a jazz trance, pretending to play a clarinet  and doing a little dance with his eyes shut.

  "Howard!" called Vince.  He wasnt listening.
 "HOWARD!" shouted Vince, but he still wasnt listening
He went up to howard and slapped him, and he came out of the trance. He looked like he did last friday night when he had too much alcohol.

  "AHH!" shrieked Howard. "You know you should never do that to sombody in a jazz trance! it could give them a heart attack!" Shrieked Howard, But Vince wasnt listening..

 "Hey Howard listen, Have you seen my straigtners??"

"Yeah, they're on your bed"
    Vince rushed into his room and saw them there on top of his drainpipes
"They were there the whole time ???" he thought to himself
    He cursed them  [Which he thought he would never do ever in his life] and carried them over to his mirror and pluged them in.

                    T.W.O   H.O.U.R.S   L.A.T.ER.

Howard walked into Vinces room.
 "Your STILL straigtning your hair??" Howard said like he couldnt believe he took so long [..well actually he could he was always took hours to make himself look nice.]

 "Next time could you knock plea--"
                 But Vince was inturupted by a knock at the door.
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"Why does it smell like a wet cat down here??"  asked Vince

"Oh, Bollo is making some magic muffins  in the kitchen"

"Yuck did he put a wet cat in the mixture??" said Vince, holding his nose and pretending to me sick.

"So what are they for Naboo?"  howard asked as he went to answer the door

"Oh they're poisonous, for Bad guys and things like that" replied Naboo with a smile, "So dont any of you go eating them on me!" he said as he walked into the kitchen to help bollo bake them [bollo needed Naboo to help with the baking, he always burn himself!]

Howard opened the door and there stood a tallish man in a purple and black cape with dark hair and a
scar on his neck

   "Hello, can i help you.?" said Howard

"Hello, i was just wondering if you would be so kind as to give me a bed for the night?" replied a small quiet voice

        "Yeah ok" replied Naboo in a sympathetic voice as he was coming from the kitchen"
      
Bollo made the sette Comfy for the stranger to sleep on and put out some hot coa-coa and a few hobnobs on the table on the side of the bed as he was looking weak and hungry

The stranger was wearing a mask over his face so you could only see his hair and neck

"Have you ever thought of getting a perm...?" Vince asked the stranger  "..Because theres no action in your hair what so ever"

He didnt mean to be rude but he always had to say what he thought of people's hair and clothes and what they should do to improve their look

"Shhhh!" said Naboo.

 the man tried to ignore what he had said to him

"...And have you ever tried going to topshop for your clothes.??"

   "SHHH VINCE!!"

"Goodnight sir !" called Naboo as he switched off the lights

      "Goodnight!!!" Called vince in his childish  voice

 [..it was more of the ten year old inside him that said it]

"Please, call me James!"

"ok Goodnight James" said Naboo

"Goodnight James" shouted Vince
 
"Goodnight James" said bollo and vince

       
Hmm that name reminded Naboo of sombody he didnt like, but he thought to himself there were lots of people in capes called james !

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               End of chapter one..x

wow! lol, it took me quit a while to make this and type out so please comment on what u thought of the first chapter

you dont have to write things about what should be in the next chapter, its up to you maybe just say what u thought of it.

Right.. Now everyone send me messages saying what you would like to happen in chapter 2

•   Should James turn out to be evil and ruin steal or ruin everything??
•  Will Vince ever part with his straigtners ?? (lol)
•  If James is going to be evil, Who should he take control of, Vince, Howard, Naboo, Or Bollo ??
• What should the story line (main part of the story) be about
•  So please comment !